Shearwater

Since it's review Sunday, I might as well go all out, eh? So, here we go! Youv'e just got to do what's right, okay? I say we burn typos alive. ...

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Hey Skins! Pink here! “These ones are mingin’ though,” he shrugged. “yours are way nicer.” You're missing a capitalization here. 'Yours are way nicer." “For being a complete knob and ...

GAH! I hate myself! The thing is, I always memorize what I write so when I reread it, I can't spot those little typos. I will read my work backwards ...

Hi Wicked! Pink here :) Here to do a quick review for this short piece, hope you don't mind ;) My fiancée, James, always refused to come to the bar ...

Bonjour, Skins! C'est moi, Pink ;) Allez! His eyes simply remained shut. The air around me was so cold, it felt as though it was burning my skin. Cold air ...

Hey Coral! It's Pink ;) Awesome, you're drawing still. I know how hard it is to get back in the swing of things. I've been having that problem as well, ...

Hey Carly! Pink here :) So, I've noticed that you're still making some mistakes regarding punctuation. I meant to mention it before and I think I did in one of ...

Was going to review these all the other day, but Persephoneia beat me to it on exactly the same day, and I had noticed that we had been reviewing a ...

Hey Carlito! I've been wanting to review the rest of this but kept pushing it back, sorry. But I was thinking for something to review and just remembered that I ...

Hey Crafty, Pink here! First of all, this is totally awesome. I love how you used mother nature's voice to write a letter to humans. It's funny and yet you ...

Hi Hannah, I'm here to review the next part ;) but can't remember where she put anything, because after James left it was sort of a red, embarrassed blur, spreading ...

Hey Skins! Back for another review, mwahaha. Alrighty... She was smirking as she constantly chewed on the piece of gum that was in her mouth. I would loose the word ...

Hi Hannah! Pink here! Nitpicks When she pulls the handle on the door of her SUV, Ruth can feel the pop and slide of the gears as they free the ...

Wow. It's amazing how fast you guys get to this :) Thanks for the comments! I'm fixing those little mistakes, Other1, thanks for pointing them out. ~Shear