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Re: Rename The User Above You
trixsy
Sep 27, 2010 -
Re: Balcony at Midnight
Yuri! I didn't know your wrote poems :D So, I'm not much of a poet but I shall review your piece, nonetheless. It's the least I could do for the ...
Sep 27, 2010 -
Re: It begins with a pencil and white paper.
Hey Other! :D Pink here, dropping by for a quick review :) 1. Super cool. I really like the shading on this one and the depth is nice too. I ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Chatper 1: Junior Year
Hi! Pink here, for a review! Isaiah was an annoyance to me. For some reason he'd been in my English class Sophomore year and now, my Junior year, I imagined ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Poem That Got Me a Date to Homecoming
Hi! Pink here :) So I've read this before and I think it was sweet and short. I mean, I wish a guy wrote me a poem haha. I think ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Better To Have Loved And Lost?
Hey Light, Pink here! So I've read your piece and I think I love it. I mean, the bitterness to it was astounding and you kept your voice clean and ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: The Lie of a Normal Life
Hi Quill, Pink here :) So, I actually liked this piece, it was nicely written and I did enjoy how you connected everything through the little lie that she been ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Cross Your Heart (One-shot)
Hey Wicked! Pink here, dropping by to do a short review. So, I think you had a good idea here. I mean there were minor mistakes but I won't point ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Fire
Hi Pink here! I'll be reviewing your work today :D Fires long to consume. They rage and ravage, burning whatever encounters their path, transforming it into ash and embers and ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Love, The Boy Above...
Hey Books! Here to review! Super speedy one though, hope you don't mind :) So I'm not going to nitpick since it's been done and I don't feel like doing ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: The Definition of Love
Alrighty, Jalmoc :D Nitpicks It seemed like a normal day in Plymouth, IN. I would use the whole name of the state instead of just the initials. “Bubby, time to ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Murder Can Write 2/2 (a two-part story)
Hey! Pink here, again :) Nitpicks Its shrill and raspy voice had snapped me out of my petrified state. I think it should be "it's" A human being in miniature, ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Murder Can Write 1/2 (a two-part story)
Hola! Pink here :) So I'll be reviewing this, hope you don't mind. Nitpicks TUESDAY. 1:20PM. That particular Manila afternoon was killing me. The rainy season was supposed to have ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Aren: Guardian Angel
Hi baywolf! So first of all I want to compliment you on the turn of the word 'angel' here. Describing them as aliens was quite funny and I liked the ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: [Cool title goes here]
Hi Kel, Pink here! Review sunday means review, review so that's what I'm here to do. ;) You said criticism...so... Nitpicks "Oh come on Will" said Jack as they marched ...
Sep 26, 2010
