Shearwater

Grit.

Heya Sprite! Thanks for the request ^^ So, you're trying to decide whether or not you should make a novel out of this, correct? Hmmm... After reading this, I'm not ...

Hey! Sorry for my lateness @___@ But, I'm here and I'm going to review this novel. Now, I might not comment on every chapter, just ones that I think you ...

Hey, Shubhi and Lily! ^^ Nitpicks/comments The flashlights, the disco ball, and the worst of all-his hands rolled around her waist. I would reword this: The flashing lights, the disco ...

Banned for letting your head go to the gutter.

Kendra! I'm here to review, as promised ^^ Nitpicks Unless it was Facebook or Microsoft then he wasn’t all that successful because I’d never heard of him. Hah XD The ...

Hi, Ointe! The Mist clings to the mountains like a young child not wanting its mother to leave, The Mist floats over the ocean like a drifting cloud, full of ...

9/10 because it's awesome!

The third one is a stunner. ;) But I'm going to miss the guy...

Firstly, I agree with Kyll. Realism should be learned first, I actually think learning to draw cartoon can prove to be quite a difficult task but everyone is different. Try ...

Dunna nuna-nunna-nuna Batman, Batman! 8D Cool picture ;) I love his expression and yeah, MS paint is terrible. Although, they did make some improvements to it in Windows 7. There ...

Megsug-Done! Flower~child-Done! ^^

Hey Flower! So, unfortunately, I'm probably the worst poet on the site, therefore my review is as good as hot fudge on a summer day. Yup. Might do you more ...

Hi Meg! Thanks again for the request ^^ Alright, this is going to be quite a short review, I apologize but I found myself unable to really find anything that ...

o.o Check out all the wolf avvies lol Anyways, thanks for telling me about this! I'm glad to hear that I encouraged you to expand this into a novel. I ...