Shearwater

Hey, Perse! I'll be reviewing this for you today. :) Nitpicks/Comments The night was full of bruises. Fresh blues and purples of street corner shadows, fading greens and yellows in ...

Hey Rayne! Pink here :) Nitpicks/Comments Cold. I remember it was cold. I was walking along the only beach in my town, Fallen Leaf. People think that everyplace in California ...

Hey, Max (can I call you that?") Pink here! Welcome to YWS! It's certainly a 'homey' environment if you let it be. We're all nice people. :) I believe fantasy ...

Banned for not having a colorful avvie.

Chapter Thirteen (Liliah) “Never say I love you, if you don't really care- Never talk about feelings if they aren't really there- Never touch a life if you mean to ...

Awesome Sureal! I always think I'm not putting enough description in but thinking about it, it's not really needed. lol

Hey, Puppets! I'm super sorry I'm late. But yeah, you know I'm doing NaNo and have a short attention span. However, I am here and I'm ready to do this ...

Hey there, Inked! Stranger Pink here! Welcome to YWS, hope you find it to be what you're looking for. :) Childish? Well...I do say we have one thing in common. ...

Now that's a diet I could live with. Seconded.

Yo, Wolfgirl! I'm Pink/Shear/Water :) Welcome to YWS! Glad to have you here. Don't fret, this is a wonderful site to help enhance your writing skills. I know I've drastically ...

Patch-Gluttony Someone took my food. Somebody had the guts to steal Patch Collin's food. I growled, lifting my nose up to sniff the air. My head shot to the left ...

Someone-Done! Alright, free for the next :3

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Hey Someone, Pink here! Welcome to YWS! I won't do a line by line but I will point out a few things that I think you should address or work ...

Your father holds power now. Fear me even more! Just kidding. Yeah, we're the new greens but don't worry, we don't bite. :3