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Re: Soul Catchers [Started]
President Grey – Organization Headquarters I was in my office, eying Headmaster Carver as he stood in front of me with his hands behind his back. His thick glasses sat ...
Dec 15, 2010 -
Re: Rate The Custom Title Above You
10/10 Because YWS only has one local crocodile as far as I remember.
Dec 14, 2010 -
Re: Old Camera
Hey Coral! I apologize for getting to this so late. First of all, I think it's a wonderful idea that you took a set of pictures on an old camera. ...
Dec 14, 2010 -
Re: Untitled.
Hey, Pink here! Nitpicks/Comments Fluffy, creamy marshmallows dipped halfway in the unicorn cup full of hot cocoa just waiting to be devoured. Outside, it’s snowing. White, perfect snowflakes, each
Dec 13, 2010 -
Re: The Ruby of Zoran
Vonual S'haara My feet maneuvered skillfully through the forest trees and before I knew it, I was clear of the forest path. The vastness of Ziras field was a sight ...
Dec 13, 2010 -
Re: Soul Catchers [Started]
Name: Adam Pierce Age: 20 Gender: Male Classification: Soul Catcher Appearance: He is quite thin and tall but all his meat is muscle. He trained hard for his Soul Catcher ...
Dec 12, 2010 -
Re: Soul Catchers [Started]
Welcome to Soul Catchers! Rated 16+ for violence and language. In this world, souls are just as real as the touch of water on your hand. From the beginning of ...
Dec 12, 2010 -
Re: Soul Catchers DT
This DT will contain some important information regarding the storybook and will be used to answer any questions. Souls Souls are the essence inside every living thing. From a human ...
Dec 12, 2010 -
Re: Into the Depths. 1
Hey, Ellie! Here as requested! I don't have many nitpicks. It seems that you have a great understanding of your basic punctuation rules and all so I won't go into ...
Dec 11, 2010 -
Re: Almost
Hi Angela! Thank you for requesting me, I'm here to review. I'll try to be as nice as I can but don't hate me if I sound somewhat harsh. Nitpicks/Comments ...
Dec 11, 2010 -
Re: The Ruby of Zoran
Vonual S'haara careful," Father stated firmly. He believe in me no doubt, but he was afraid. Afraid that his only daughter would get lost in her travels or worse...die. Not ...
Dec 11, 2010 -
Re: The Cute War of the Ages (PART 2)
YAY! You posted more! Anyway, I shall still review this. Guido spoke sternly. Staring at the control panel Sniks stood at. Okay, I just noticed that Sniks is Skins backwards. ...
Dec 11, 2010 -
Re: Fresh Meat!!
MMMmmm Fresh meat. *noms jelly* Wait...that's not meat! >.> I mean, welcome to YWS! Have a penguin! Ohhh, I'm an ex-romance writer in the making! I'm currently trying to finish ...
Dec 11, 2010 -
Re: Newbieee
Hey! Welcome to YWS! I'm Pink. :) Have a dancing animal! So you're into poetry hmm? I find myself lost in that area, I can't really comprehend it's structure but ...
Dec 10, 2010 -
Re: Magnified by Jash Bagabaldo *tweaked*
Hey Jashy! Remember I told you I might or might not review this? Well, I'm going to not review this! =D Instead, I'll just tell you how great it was. ...
Dec 10, 2010
