Shearwater

Adam Pierce – Soul Catcher My teeth racked against my bottom lip. Fingers tightened on the steering wheel of my black car as I felt the drainage in my chest ...

Yay, thank you for the awesome review, Son! I fail at catching my own mistakes. :'( Anyway, I went ahead and edited the nitpicks. Also, Chase and Olivia ended up ...

Vonual S'haara Of course, a human would have been treated so badly. If I were in her place, I might have done the same thing and stolen the precious ruby. ...

I think...I forgot how to write. And this chapter is insanely dodgy. I knew what to write but had a hard time getting it all down. If you're wondering why ...

Ahaah! You were just about rank ten on the cool scale but you managed a 20. Nice. :') Our character can meet before they even meet. It's beautiful! We have ...

Aye, Skins. You get drunk? :O But you don't have to, I was just wondering. However, it would be funny...

XD Okay, coolness! Nah, I was just wondering because of the whole starbucks things. lol

Psht, whatevas. By the way, who was the guy Liam was checking out in your post?

XD Too bad. The truth hurts, freak.

Yes, that will work. :)

Hmm, I'd rather not have any teleportation going on, it makes things complicated. I would go with normal transport methods, motorcycle, cars, planes.

Heya! Pink here! Since I have a few other things to do, I won't go into depth this piece. Which means, no nitpicks because they waste a lot of time. ...

Angela-Done stelagineva-Done Persephoneia-Done SilentRain-Done Sorry about the delay. ^.^'

Hi Rain, Pink here! I'm not going to do a whole nitpicking session because I feel like that's not really worth the time. I mean, you already have a solid ...

Adam Pierce – Soul Catcher “Aish, you vermin…I know you’re here,” I hissed. My eyes adjusted to the growing darkness, scanning the deep alley. There… The demon was long and ...