Shearwater

Ah, the main character is not the prisoner? Well, that's odd. Well, is your main character the woman then? If so, in my opinion, I would suggest you make it ...

ChiquitaBanana, I so feel you. (It's alright if I call you that, yes? Punch me if otherwise. :3) I'm actually a terrible poet and I keep away from the poetry ...

Banned for having four x's in your username.

They there! Wow, this is one very clear shot of a bluejay. The colors are beautiful and the details are great. A part of me is thinking that the resolution ...

Hi there! This is a nice boat. I mean, it's bit old and rusty looking but that's what gives it character, right? Since that seems to be the strength of ...

Hey there, Tpak! I like this bit, it's neat to see the way your character takes in the whole transformation thing. Although it was an interesting passage I couldn't full ...

Hey, there Daughter! I'm going to review this for you today. This review is going to be a little short but hopefully you'll pick up at least one or two ...

Hi, Anshita! Pink here, dropping by for a short review. So, I loved the beginning. It was written well and it was definitely a puller. The whole I was surrounded ...

Hey there! Ah...chibis. My arch enemies when it comes to drawing anime. I find them too simplistic to actually draw them without hitting myself in the head with a bat. ...

Hey, Ellie! Here to review. ;) “Sure,” Helena said, “That would be wonderful. May I take my blanket?” The 'that' here shouldn't be capitalized. When you're using an interruption or ...

*love it x infinity* Wow, this was amazingly terrible but so entertaining that it makes me want to seriously hut "hug" (typo) you. Here, have an internet hug, like seriously! ...

Hi there Dreamer! I'll be doing a short review for you on this. First of all, you seemed to do a lot of info dumping in this chapter. The first ...

8/10 Because the opacity is low and it deprives the avvie of its wonderful colors. D':

Hey there! Overall, it looks like you spent a bit of time on this and I wish you all the best for the competition. However, there are a few nitpicks ...

Hey there Dragon! Your introduction to your piece could use some more power. It's a bit confusing with the lack of information that you have. Try to make this longer ...