Shearwater

Hey Otherone! =D 1. I really like this picture. I always had a thing for drawing ballerinas or dancers. It must be the way they're bodies are always in a ...

I always wanted to critique this fifty word story...I don' know why but I'm going to anyway. Firstly, I like the first sentence. It introduces a problem and captures some ...

Hey there! I actually really liked the opening sentence. It was nicely written and felt very um, magical? I suppose that could be the word for it. Anyway, I find ...

Hey there, Pink here to review. The three of us are driving too fast down a road shimmering with noonlight. *moonlight. Since this is a short piece, you should go ...

Hey there, Sweet! Awesome drawing! I'm quite a fan of digital artwork so this is quite amazing. Did you use a mouse or do you own a tablet? As for ...

Hi there! I'm Pink, I'll be doing a quick review for you today. I liked your opener, it was pulling. Your writing was a tad so-so, I noticed a few ...

Hey there flower! I didn't know you drew! >.> Well, I'm here for a quick review. First one is magic, Gir? *win* I liked the shading on this one and ...

Hey there! I'm here for a short review. Okay, so I actually really approve of this openers. Nice way of bringing the readers into the story, it's definietly a good ...

Hey there! This is a very nice picture. The detail is nice, sloppy, but nice. I think her eyes are gorgeous, so big and sparkly looking. Yup, I'm a weirdo. ...

Rawr, I come to review. ^^ I’m not active and I have four eyes sometimes. Tell me if there’s something that I have to realize. The first part of this ...

Hey there, Tpak! I didn't like your opener, it was blunt and you dove straight into description of a Victorian house. When you open up a chapter you want to ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I hope you're enjoying the site. Okay to begin with, it seems like you're a new writer. I've noticed many punctuation and dialogue errors that ...

Hey there! I'm here to review! ^^ So I liked your opener. It wasn't exactly a 'gotcha' but the idea behind it was nice and makes you think, gets the ...

Hey, Freak. Punk here, to review! I'm not going to be nitpicky. Oh what the heck, maybe I'll throw in a few. Here, take these. It was like a nipping ...

Hey there! I'm Pink, I'll be doing a short review for you today. First of all, this seems like a very cool dream. Normally, I don't usually dream or I ...