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Shearwater

  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Magi {ch. 4}

    Hey, Pointe. I'll try my best to keep up with your novel but if I lose concentration or lose my track, don't be mad at me. >.< If you really ...

    Jan 8, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: What Makes a Man (Contest Entry)

    Thank you for the reviews. Sorry about little errors, I have a hard time finding my own typos. As for the commas, I generally do that and I guess I ...

    Jan 8, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: The Inch

    Hey, Whisperer! I'm sorry for forgetting about reviewing this. It just got lost in my inbox and that thing moves fast. >.> Anyway, I'm here now. “I don’t see any ...

    Jan 8, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: をすべて満たすためにニース ;3

    Konnichiwa, Ani-san! Watashi wa Pink desu. :3 Welcome to YWS! I like your colorful introduction there, it's very pretty. You know, we might a few things in common. I also ...

    Jan 8, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: What Makes a Man (Contest Entry)

    This is a short story for Skins' Contest ( Check out details here ). I need some help brushing this up. I'm not sure how else I could go about ...

    Jan 7, 2011
  • Randomosity Archive Re: What is the member above you known for? [2]

    For writing interesting stories, being my daughter, liking Mcfly and for um, being confused as a guy half the time. :3

    Jan 7, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Stop and Stare (Part 4)

    Alright, Freak. I'm here. :3 So my review isn't exactly going to be a long one in this case, just a short overview of what I thought while reading this. ...

    Jan 7, 2011
  • Archive Re: Chasing Ghosts

    Vanessa Lionel - Suzanne's High School friend Vanessa steadied her hand, her lips pressed tight as she applied the glossy clear nail polish. Suddenly, the door opened and her little ...

    Jan 5, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Know I'm Here(Prologue)

    Hey, Shubs! (Still calling you that.) So, I noticed that you wanted an overall review of this and I'm glad because I don't exactly feel like nitpicking either. Lately, I ...

    Jan 5, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: A Glimpse of Death (ten times new and improved :D)

    Hi Jesi, here to review! I don't have many nitpicks that I want to go over so you're saved there. Actually, I didn't notice anything that needed to be quoted. ...

    Jan 3, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: Feed The Pink Elephant! [Open!]

    Coral- Done Pointe2drama- Done Jesiica- Done Shrubbery- Done I am now free to take up more request. ^^

    Jan 3, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Magi {Ch. 1}

    Hey Pointe! Yes, you're right I haven't reviewed anything for you as of late. ^^ Okay, to start off with. I noticed you had quite a bit of comma errors ...

    Jan 3, 2011
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [4]

    10/10 White tigers FTW.

    Jan 3, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Hollow Bones

    Hey, Coral! I'm here to review. As always, I shall begin by telling you how unfitting I am when it comes to reviewing poetry. Also it seems as if you ...

    Jan 3, 2011
  • General Articles Re: Narrative Essay on an Abusive Relationsip

    Hai, Mizz! Normally, I don't review non-fiction because I'm not very good at it but I'll do my best for this one. I'll try to help you in whatever way ...

    Jan 2, 2011


You cannot have an opponent if you keep saying yes.
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