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Re: The Magi {ch. 4}
Hey, Pointe. I'll try my best to keep up with your novel but if I lose concentration or lose my track, don't be mad at me. >.< If you really ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: What Makes a Man (Contest Entry)
Thank you for the reviews. Sorry about little errors, I have a hard time finding my own typos. As for the commas, I generally do that and I guess I ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: The Inch
Hey, Whisperer! I'm sorry for forgetting about reviewing this. It just got lost in my inbox and that thing moves fast. >.> Anyway, I'm here now. “I don’t see any ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: をすべて満たすためにニース ;3
Konnichiwa, Ani-san! Watashi wa Pink desu. :3 Welcome to YWS! I like your colorful introduction there, it's very pretty. You know, we might a few things in common. I also ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: What Makes a Man (Contest Entry)
This is a short story for Skins' Contest ( Check out details here ). I need some help brushing this up. I'm not sure how else I could go about ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: What is the member above you known for? [2]
For writing interesting stories, being my daughter, liking Mcfly and for um, being confused as a guy half the time. :3
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 4)
Alright, Freak. I'm here. :3 So my review isn't exactly going to be a long one in this case, just a short overview of what I thought while reading this. ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Chasing Ghosts
Vanessa Lionel - Suzanne's High School friend Vanessa steadied her hand, her lips pressed tight as she applied the glossy clear nail polish. Suddenly, the door opened and her little ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: Know I'm Here(Prologue)
Hey, Shubs! (Still calling you that.) So, I noticed that you wanted an overall review of this and I'm glad because I don't exactly feel like nitpicking either. Lately, I ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: A Glimpse of Death (ten times new and improved :D)
Hi Jesi, here to review! I don't have many nitpicks that I want to go over so you're saved there. Actually, I didn't notice anything that needed to be quoted. ...
Jan 3, 2011 -
Re: Feed The Pink Elephant! [Open!]
Coral- Done Pointe2drama- Done Jesiica- Done Shrubbery- Done I am now free to take up more request. ^^
Jan 3, 2011 -
Re: The Magi {Ch. 1}
Hey Pointe! Yes, you're right I haven't reviewed anything for you as of late. ^^ Okay, to start off with. I noticed you had quite a bit of comma errors ...
Jan 3, 2011 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [4]
10/10 White tigers FTW.
Jan 3, 2011 -
Re: Hollow Bones
Hey, Coral! I'm here to review. As always, I shall begin by telling you how unfitting I am when it comes to reviewing poetry. Also it seems as if you ...
Jan 3, 2011 -
Re: Narrative Essay on an Abusive Relationsip
Hai, Mizz! Normally, I don't review non-fiction because I'm not very good at it but I'll do my best for this one. I'll try to help you in whatever way ...
Jan 2, 2011
