Shearwater

Hi there! I'll be reviewing this for you today! I liked it, it was moving in small way but I do think you could have written this out a little ...

I can walk around the room if move very slowly *If I move very slowly. but at least I won’t have to hurt Hoas. I hate this guy! And hate ...

Okay, well maybe I won't think about it too much then! If I think too much about it then it'll ruin it. As far as gods go, that's actually quite ...

H'OKAY! So like, I read the comments first and then I got all excited to read this! I know right, it's so awesome. :3 So anyway, here we go! I ...

Okay I'm back! Yay! lol So I feel extremely horrible for this child right now. I don't understand why her diary entries are still lacking some emotion though. I mean, ...

Okay, I'm here! Firstly, why do you have so many 'did's in your names? First it was Granidid and now this Archondid and if you want, you can consider the ...

Hey Snoink! I'm here to review. Well this won't actually be a review because for one fact, you already have so many other awesome reviews that my review would just ...

Hi there! I'll be reviewing this piece for you today! (Also, I'll be reviewing as I read.) My first impressions of this is cliche. I mean, you have someone popular ...

Okay so I'm back for more because that first chapter made me feel like, "WHOO!!" xD So I'm going to start with just a few nitpicks first! The trees had ...

Okay! I'm here for the next chapter! ^__^ Okay so your narration is a bit odd. Let's take this sentence for example: This meadow we were in was a small ...

Hey there partner! I'm here to review! So, I like this. It's a bit interesting but it seems a bit cliche at the moment but then again, a lot of ...

Hey there! I'm here to review! Okay, so firstly I want to talk about the first paragraph. It was definietly and a puller and I enjoyed reading it and it ...

Hi there crafty! I'm so sorry for getting to this so late. I honestly forgot about it but then I remember that I had a review request so I went ...

Some say that freedom comes after graduating High School – that wasn’t the case for Kristabel Westchester, who spent her entire life waiting for the day when she would be ...

asdoifansdigawpoiernekjih;lk !!!! ^ That is the sound of my excitement.