Shearwater

Hi there! I'm here to review this piece for you! So I liked the first chapter, or the first part of the first chapter and I'm definietly liking this chapter ...

Hey there, Peanut! I'm here to review this! I frown; it’s not as pretty In the first two paragraphs you already use three semicolons, ; . It's just three right ...

Hello friend! Welcome to YWS! I hope you're enjoying the site so far. Wow, you live in England huh? I always wanted to go there for a visit. It's been ...

Hey look! It's another Indian. Welcome to YWS! I'm Indian too, sweet. My Hindi isn't very powerful though, but I'm part of subbing team for Hindi movies and such and ...

Gah! My mouse always get stuck over Niteowl's 'gift' or smiley heaven. xD Anyway, hi! I'm Pink or shear, nice to meet you! I first joined this site because I ...

Hi there, welcome to YWS! I'm pretty thankful for this forum too. Isn't it just the best thing ever? I mean, Nate's a genius. He's our site admin and creator. ...

HI there! Maybe you remember me from such literacy works as.. Just kidding. I'm glad to have you back with us! What was your other username? Maybe I might remember ...

Well, hi there! Welcome to YWS! Based on your introduction, I can tell that you seem like a really awesome person! xD Just kidding. Why don't you tell us more ...

Hey there! I'm here to review! ^___^ I'm not going to say I love it because I don't really understand it. It's something, a bit of machinery that she made ...

Wow this chapter was filled with a lot of things. I mean, wow. Hoas freaking turned into a girl? Who is her cousin? Her father has a sister? I'm so ...

Okay, I like how slowly things are changing and as Born2 said, it's not as repetitive anymore so that makes me just as happy as Solea...when she's in a good ...

Okay so I accidentlly started reading chapter 8 before I read this one and I was like, wait...this doesn't seem normal! XD So I'm back to the right spot and ...

Hey there! I'll be reviewing this for you today! First of all, I did like this. Mostly the ending because it seemed very power compared to the rest of the ...

Hi there! I'm here to review for you! "Rylee, I fell like something’s wrong." I explained as I buckled my seat belt. *feel like something is wrong. He started to ...

Hey, there! I'll be reviewing this for you today! Okay, so first of all, I did like the story. It was interesting and I felt pulled into it. You opener ...