Shearwater

Hey there! I'm here to review! Sorry I forgot about this, I blame the whole team review thingy, seriously. xD Okay, I'll start with just a few nitpicks. Holy scrap! ...

trying as she's lacing up her sneakers to persuade me to join her I don't really understand this sentence. It isn't my problem, I realize. This is the end. Someone ...

Hi there! I'm going to be reviewing this for you. So I'm going to start with a bit of nitpicks first, okay? I had only known him for a year, ...

Hi! I'll be reviewing this for you today. Firstly, you just jumped into your story without really getting into the plot or anything. You just start the story right off ...

Hi there! Nice to meet you! I'm pink! Welcome to YWS! Do you like the site so far? I hope you're enjoying the place. So what kind of writing do ...

Hi there! I'm here to review! ^.^ I really like this piece. It's quite emotional and moving and you were able to do that all without using ginnormous amounts of ...

Hi welcome to the site! If you're confused you can always ask some in green, aka me! Or Snoink! xD Or anyone in red. We know our way around the ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! It's nice to have you here! I'm Pink/Shear and I'm a mod on the site. This being said, if you have any questions you can ...

Hi there! I'll be reviewing this for you. It's going to be a quick review since I haven't really read the other chapters of this. I have just a few ...

oh wow, Ranger Yurii! I didn't know you could draw! xD It's actually really, really good. The shading is all correct and it's cleanly done too. I love the YWS ...

Oh hi! Welcome to YWS! You like to write prose huh? I'm not much of a poetry person but if you have anything you need reviewed you can always come ...

Whoo! Congrats!!

Yo, Freak! I'm here to review! xD So, I don't really have any nitpicks for this prologue and I'm glad you wrote something before the whole first chapter thing. xD ...

Hey there! I'm back for this last chapter that you have. :D I don't know how helpful I'm going to be though. I can't find much to critique about your ...

Hi Peanut! I'm back for more. ^.^ Alrighty, once again your writing is great. I love the descriptions and yadda, yadda. I hate repeating this all the time but I ...