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Re: Snoink
:O
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Finding Perfection.
Hey there, Kagi! I'm here to review for you. ^^ Nitpicks & Comments Kelly O'Brien was surrounded by white and cream dresses hung delicately on smooth hangers. Hung should actually ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: YWS Flyer: The Jag Edition
Swweeeeeeeettttt. I'd totally hang this in my room next to my poster of Pat Buchanan.
May 5, 2011 -
Re: The Devil's Pocket Watch (2.1)
Chapter Two Magic & Birds Her eyes felt heavy, opening them felt like trying to pry open a closed elevator door. Kris tilted her head back and groaned. With a ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Those Times
Hey! You never told me about this one! If you did, then for some unexplainable reason, I never actually saw it. :/ Anyway, I'm glad you PM'd me about it. ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: JabberHut
Jabberbubbles! Yay!
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Junior Moderator Area?
I keep thinking Pat Buchanan is Pat BuchMAN. :/ *Will now move along.*
May 4, 2011 -
Re: I need a cigarette (the Remix)
Hi there! Here to review. Now, I'm honestly a pretty terrible poet so my knowledge of poetry is quite limited. I don't really know much about it but I'll still ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Windmills of my mind
Those are some nice...windmills. xD Where did you take them? I remember once I was driving through Indiana and I saw a whole bunch of them go down for miles ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Feed The Pink Elephant! [Open!]
Kay, all of them are done! I'll be more than happy to take up more!
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Hey everybody
Hi there! Welcome to YWS! I'm Pink/Shear. Whatever. So you like to write novels huh? I know that they're hard to finish. I'm currently working on one right now. xD ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: My Guardian Dog 3 - Rewritten!
Hey, Wife! I'm here to review!
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Hey guys
Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I'm Pink or Shear - whatever name you prefer to call me is fine. I'm pretty sure you'll come to like this site, most people ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: He said, She said.
I'm going to say that using 'said' is actually quite good than using other tags. Said is simple and I know it's repetitive but when you feel like it's getting ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Swearing
It depends on the audience, as everyone was saying. But it also depends on the character you're writing. If he's a young but terrible kid then the chances that he ...
May 2, 2011
