Shearwater

Thanks for the comments, I'm glad you guys enjoyed this! I caught a few mistakes myself and edited them. I think I fixed most of the common mistakes, like typos ...

Hi Lava! Pink here. Just passing by to give you a quick review. Okay first off, you need to shade a little more. Not go overboard and shade every little ...

Hey guys, thanks for picking out the tiny little mistakes. I reviewed this [yet again] and made some small changes and hopefully there's no more weird typos or odd sentences. ...

________________________________________________________ Chapter One: Whisper Maybe, Val thought, it was just her. She swore she saw Whisper across this wide Chicago street, but she didn’t…again s

Oh my god, they are amazing! I recently watched the New Moon spoof. Thought it was hilarious. "I'm a Doctor!" "Dad, you're embarrassing me!" =D

Hi Beckiw, I've got to say these are really amazing pictures! You shot them in the perfect position and they all look wonderful! My only suggestion would be to edit ...

Yay, finally chapter five! Okay, so you totally changed a lot of things, which isn't bad at all. I still love the way you write Fawn's emotions. She's really funny! ...

Hey Jayliegh! Wow this chapter is like, totally different. Except for the beginning... Well, I spotted a few silly mistakes that I'd like to point out. I hope over the ...

7/10 cool colors =]

Hey Jayliegh! I can't do a full-on review but I can give you some tips and well, stuff. Okay, amazing job on the introduction! It sounds much better than it ...

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I always thought tests and quizzes were a great opportunity to raise my grade. =D TUBM: Likes Caramel apples.

9/10 LOL I love LOTR.

Hey there Classy! Thanks for PMing me about your second part. Hopefully my review helps! So here we go! But, I was forced to focus my attention on the inside ...

Hi Kaylay! Pink here. I'm going to review this promising looking piece here. First off, I think you should try to break these paragraphs up. They're too cramped up and ...