Shearwater

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Hey Jayleigh! (Arr, I always mix up the 'e' and 'i'!) Okay, heads up, this review is going to suck so be prepared. Oh my, you're already on Chapter eleven! ...

KikiSaysRAWR!-Done. Whoo! Anyone else? :elephant:

Well, hey there, it's Pink! As requested. =] Alright, *rubs hands* let's get started. Nitpicks "We have found another one," she said to me over the phone in serious tone. ...

Rascalover-Done. I enjoyed your story, I might just go back and read the beginning if I have the chance.

Hey, Pink here, as requested. So I read through your brief explanation and I think I understand what's going on here. Alright, I just want to point out some nitpicks ...

Whoo-hoo Jayliegh! Are you seriously taking out the engagement? Why? This was really good. I just love Warren and Fay (I know I said that, but I just wanted to ...

Hey there, Pink here :wink: I'm sorry. I'm not here to review, it's just...I laughed so hard I almost fell off my chair. My parents were looking at me like ...

You know you're a nerd when you think killing computer virus' are fun. It's like an intense video game!

Hey friend, It's me again! I can't wait to see what you're planning for the next chapter by the way. Alright, no nitpicks because for some reason my brain refuses ...

Hey Tanya, I'm going to review this piece for you, so let's get started. Nitpicks “Daddy! NO!” You do not need to capitalize, just "No!" No,” she thought, “where did ...

Yeah I know, I'm a total Cassandra Clare fan. Don't worry it's just the beginning that seems similar to Mortal Instruments. The next chapters are like, way off. I'm glad ...

Anybody? Please :) hahaa

Well, hello there, Angelbeeps (I totally love your avatar) Welcome to YWS, I hope you enjoy it here as much as the rest of us! Let me review some quick ...

Whoo hoo it's posted! Alright, Pink is here to do some reviewing. Nitpicks Her voice vibrates off the rocks around us. Her tone is strong and confident. You can totally ...