Shearwater

Hi *coco You've got a long list there so I can't promise you I'll finish it fast. But I will review them, just give me some time =] I'll continue ...

Hi *Coco, Pink here, as requested. So I've read your chapter and there's only one thing I'd really like to point out. Your wording in a few sentences is a ...

Thanks guys, I've edited a few things for right now and I might go back and fix things later (at work). Thanks again for the reviews and gold stars! :D ...

Hey Jayleigh, here to review! Nitpicks “Not exactly.” He paused. comma after exactly, you really don't need to separate those sentences. His hand slipped from my hair and my head ...

Hey Jayleigh! Pink here (again) Yay, you made it longer! This is a great start, the ending was a bit mysterious because I have no idea 'what' she might be ...

Hi Kate! Pink here and Welcome to YWS! :D I really do hope you like it here as much as the rest of us. I'm just going to review some ...

Hi GryphonFledging, Just to answer your question, yes she is afraid of Nicholas because of the way he fights. She enjoys brawling with everyone it's just that there's something about ...

I've worked with charcoal before....and I sucked. You on the other hand, you're brilliant. I love the horse, it shows so much emotion and movement, and I know horses are ...

Aww thanks, that comment made me feel super awesome. I'm definitely planing on expanding this if it builds up. Thanks again! ~Pink

Hey, Pink here! First of all, welcome to YWS! (hope you like it here). So I'm going to review this short piece for you today. First thing I noticed was ...

I am a taker, can you review the first chapter of this story? :) Under Romantic Fiction Thanks, ~Pink

Hey xLogan can you review this for me? It's under Romantic Fiction, called Thorns & Roses Thanks, ~Pink

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Hey Tanya, I'm here to review (no duh) Alright, let's get started on this one. Nitpicks “Rhee, Dad had a vision before . . . vanishing,” Drake spoke softly, “he ...

*Phew* I made it! Alright, just one nitpick... and whatever filth covering the surface. I think you should put 'is' after filth. _____________ I love this, jayleigh, I really do. ...