Shearwater

Leeanna-Done. Anyone else? :elephant:

Hey Leeanna, Pink here, as requested. :D Nitpicks Two broad-shouldered, disfigured men stomped through an old log cabin. It was fairly large, well-furnished too. I think it'd be best if ...

hey there, it's pink This is a really pretty picture. I mean I love the angle here and I love those flowers, they have such beautiful colors. I think if ...

Hi, The fist thing I thought of when I read the title was "come on, come on" because in my language that's what "aja, aja" means. So I obeyed and ...

Hey Aquamarine, it's Pink. Do you mind reviewing the second chapter of Thorns & Roses? Thanks a bunch, color buddy. (haha) ~Pink

anima9-Done. Anyone else??? I'm free!

Hello there, Pink here, as requested :D Alright so let's get down to the dirty stuff first. Nitpicks I got myself wearing a striped, black and white, long sleeved polo ...

Hey *Coco. I've finished reading all of your chapters and I've got to say, I've heard some this before. It sounds a little bit like "The Duchess" (If you have ...

Hi Coco, it's me again. Well there isn't much that I can possibly say about this chapter, I was rather 'sucked into' the storyline and forgot to check for any ...

Aww thanks, that means a lot. It's okay if you don't post a review, I'm glad just to hear comments :D ~Pink

Hey Coco, it's me again. the centre of the room is this supposed to 'center'? As others began to join the dance with their spouses I think it's 'begun' because ...

Thank you so much, I'll go over it and fix the mistakes. I've also spotted a few things that I need to change... Thanks for the tip, I'll mess with ...

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Hey Coco, Pink here! So let's begin with this new chapter, Although it was beautiful to look at, it weighed a tonne. Alright, I think 'tonne' is a bad word ...

9/10 bahaha, I love Avatar! p.s. Zuko rules!