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Hey there Coco, it's me. I think you meant to give me the link to chapter 9 and not 8, unless you made changes but I wasn't sure. I knew ...

Ha! I love this. I feel sort of bad for the dude though, I mean he tried and in the end he was turned down. Well, there are people like ...

Hey Ben! Thanks for the request! :) I have to say, I really like this idea of a 'dictionary' and as always, your humor entertains me. There were a few ...

Hey there! It's Pink :) So I thought this was kind of a long prologue but it was good. You added so much description and it the atmosphere was tense ...

Awesome, thanks Stella, I didn't notice the mistakes. I've reviewed and edited this part. :)

Hi there, I've gotta say this is a pretty amazing picture. I love the effects, the monotone color and the amazing detail the waves give off. The couple in the ...

Okay Chapter two is complete :) _______________________________________ Chapter Two: I Like Shiny Things! I quickly made my way to the couch I had left Carla on only to see her ...

Hi, here to review. :) I held back a desperate cry of aggravation and desperation and closed my eyes. You repeated desperate here, I suggest you take out the second ...

Hi there, thought I'd stop by and do a quickie review :) So here are a few things I found with grammar and all: “Gosh Lezzy, look how nice my ...

Hey there! Sorry, I got here so late. But let's get on with this review, shall we? :D Okay, I'm not exactly going to nitpick because well, that's pretty much ...

Hey Classy, I'm finally here. I have to rewrite this review because my computer messed up and I lost it. :( How sad, oh well. Here we go again! Your ...

Aqua- I get what you mean by the whole fast pace thing. I'll try harder next time and I'll do my best to edit this chapter, thank you :) Everyone ...

Hey Tanya! :D Okay I liked this chapter, full of action as always. I feel bad for all the horrible luck Noah gets himself into. It's so sad... I don't ...

Whoo! That was fun :D I have no nitpicks, most of them already picked so no point. I do wish this a bit longer though. Like more engagement between the ...

Hey Aqua! It's me again. Do you think you can review chapter 7 of Thorns & Roses? Whenever you have time :) Thanks again! ~Pink