Shearwater

It's so awesome! =D

Hey there, Crow. Pink here, I'll be doing a quick review for you today. I'll be reviewing as I write. The first thing I notice is the emotion in the ...

Hey there! I'm here to review this chapter. Sorry for being kind of late. Anyway, again I enjoyed this chapter. I actually really enjoy the personality you bring out of ...

Hi Zanna! Here to review for you! So this will be quick given that your story is also short so I don't have much to comment on. After 15 long ...

Hey there, Neon. This review is written as I read. Let's start with your prologue, I thought it was a bit unnecessary and too telly and just not serious at ...

Hey there, Mikko! I shall try not to be too harsh! We'll start with negatives and move on to positives because I like to get the bad over first. Firstly, ...

Hey there! Welcome back to YWS! I'm sure you already know how everything is done around here but if you need help, shoot me a pm. ^^ Hope you see ...

Hey, Jas! I'm here to review! First of all, thank you for giving me something to review. I got this message just when I logged in to find something to ...

Hey there! I'm back to this chapter! :D I had removed the stomach and intestines from the two bodies and I could only hope that that would be enough to ...

Hey, JCK! I'm Pink/Shear and welcome to YWS! :D *Throws confetti* I'm glad you changed your mind into joining the site. I was kind of like you, I wrote but ...

Hey, Step! Pink here, I'll be reviewing this for you today. ^^ Prologue Honestly, I didn't really see a point to the prologue. It was just stating things that I'm ...

Hey there, Song! I'm Pink! Welcome to YWS! Our community is awesome and we have some talented song writers on this site too. I'm not really good at lyric writing ...

Okay, Twit! I'm back for this second chapter! Whoo! I'm actually really, like - 'really' glad that you're still writing this and hopefully you continue because I love the way ...

Twit-done! Happy to take another request. ^^

Hey, hey Twit! So, I'm sorry about getting to this late but wow, you've got an amazing pile of review up already and I can't even imagine me picking up ...