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  • WRFF Archive Re: Feed The Pink Elephant! [Open!]

    KanenRenoir: Done! Dreamy115: Working on it :)

    Feb 17, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Assassin's Redemption- Redrafted

    Hi! Pink here as requested. Sorry I got here late, but I'm here so that counts right? Alright so I read the first version and then read the edited version ...

    Feb 17, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Monarch Butterfly [prologue]

    Thanks for the reviews! I think I'm going to rewrite the first and second chapter so I've deleted them for now and just left the prologue. ~Pink

    Feb 14, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Aberrant Romance - 1

    Hi! Pink here, dropping by to do a quick review. Firs of all, this chapter is kind of short so I don't really know much about the characters and all ...

    Feb 14, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Feed The Pink Elephant! [Open!]

    No problem. Anyone else??

    Feb 14, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: My guardian dog 3 (Edited!) OLD

    Whoa, that was cool! I wanna know what happens next, is she really like a princess or something? lol Well, I didn't see anything that I needed to point out ...

    Feb 14, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Classy Reviews [open]

    Hey friend! Do you think you can review this for me?? Pretty please :) ~Pink

    Feb 9, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Critiques from a Freyja! (Open again, yo.)

    Do you think you can review this piece for me? It's called Monarch Butterfly and it's the first chapter :) Thanks!

    Feb 9, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Monarch Butterfly [prologue]

    I added the Prologue too since it was short. It's a start to a new piece I've been working on. It's a work in progress... but I'd love to hear ...

    Feb 9, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Shifters: Chapter 3 part 2

    Hi there, sorry it's taking so long to review your chapters. It's been quite a hectic few weeks for me :) So I have read chapter 5 and it was ...

    Feb 7, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: My guardian dog (Edited!) OLD

    Oh man I'm here but I'm super late. Sorry! But I'll still review this! Since nit-picks have been harvested I shall just do an overview. Description You do an amazing ...

    Feb 5, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Feed The Pink Elephant! [Open!]

    Captain.classy-Done! Sorry took a little long. I've been busy but I'm back now so I'll be happy to take any other requests :D

    Jan 31, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Usual Navidad

    Hi there, here to do a review! So I liked the first paragraph, it was nice and detailed - very well written. But I did find a few things while ...

    Jan 31, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Lady Death 4 (Edited!)

    Hey! Sorry I'm so late! I been quite busy in the last week but I'm back! Okay so with this chapter, I want to say so many good things like ...

    Jan 31, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Feed The Pink Elephant! [Open!]

    BenFranks-Done! *Coco-Done! Thanks for the request guys, keep em' coming :)

    Jan 27, 2010


Most people ignore most poetry because most poetry ignores most people.
— Adrian Mitchell