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Re: My Sign is Vital, My Hands are Cold (kind of re-written)
Hi, Pink here! Oh my lord, I have to say this is such a touching, gripping and painful piece to read. The words just clenched my heart, you did such ...
Jul 26, 2010 -
Re: The difference of wings
Thanks, I totally get what you mean by that, I kinda wanted it to be a little cluttered though, I planned on doing some coloring and I wanted a more ...
Jul 26, 2010 -
Re: The difference of wings
A sketch I drew, it took me a little over an hour and half to finish it. Recently I've been studying anatomy and applying it to my drawing, hopefully I ...
Jul 26, 2010 -
Re: I think I love an assassin
Hi Retrodisco, Pink here. I'll be doing a quick review for your piece today. There are quite a bit of misspelled words and such in this piece that I'd like ...
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: The Dead Squad
We stood expectantly. All nineteen martyrs that we should have been waited in silence (.) (I would start a new sentence here) Sweat dribbling from our filthy heads to run ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: °•.♥.•° ☆♥★ I'd Love to Review You! ★♥☆ °•.♥.•°
Hi Coco, it's me, wondering if you had time to review a piece I'm working on. Pretty please? I'll give you points! I don't even use them lol Here's the ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Possessing Maya - OLD
Kyaaa, Tanya this was pretty amazing! It was gripping from the beginning! The whole time walkers thing is pretty cool too. Everyone already has picked out the things I wanted ...
Jul 18, 2010 -
Re: The Guardian [1] (Edited)
Thanks guys, I've cut out half the stuff and tried to make it shorter and less predictable. Still working on it and editing things, this is all I have so ...
Jul 18, 2010 -
Re: Feed The Pink Elephant! [Open!]
*Coco-Done! Thanks for the request, I'll slowly review your next chapters :) If there's one I missed, don't hesitate to post again lol I'm open for reviews! Anyone?? :D
Jul 18, 2010 -
Re: Of Loss and Love (chp.1) [newly edited]
Hey *Coco! Wow I have to say I really loved the revamped version of the first chapter. Just the very beginning was gripping enough with the whole sensing your parents ...
Jul 18, 2010 -
Re: The Guardian [1] (Edited)
Wow, I've been away for a long time... But I finally found the inspiration I was searching for. The Guardian is a new title I'm working on and hopefully I ...
Jul 17, 2010 -
Re: The Twisted Lies of a Girl In Love. Part 1
Hi! Pink here :) Alright, what to say about this piece? I really like it, it's got a bitter taste to it but her love is twisted. I'd like to ...
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: Feed The Pink Elephant! [Open!]
Sionarama-Done! Lauren-Done! Hey jasminebells, I'll be doing yours next :D
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: After Adonis
Hey Sionarama, it's Pink, here as promised. Alright so I like the whole god and goddess aspect of this. Along with the Greek mythology, it's quite refreshing and I don't ...
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: How to Seduce Money [1]
Thanks for the reviews and comments guys. I've edited this chapter and hopefully it sounds better. I changed her personality but I wanted to keep her realistic, most people aren't ...
Apr 11, 2010
