Shearwater

*gasp* ... Why? I knew it coming though, I knew it was going to be tragedy but ending like this? WHY?! Firstly, it was full of suspense and I didn't ...

D8 How terrible! I would never listen to music ever again, for sure! Hahaha Would you rather live in a jungle without human contact for the rest of your life ...

Whisper! Alright, I feel sad that your story is coming to an end and I think I might shed a tear or two. :( I have just a few things ...

Pink here! Alright, let's get started :) pushed the annoyed thoughts from my head and I think you should use 'annoying' rather than annoyed. Other than that, there's really nothing ...

Yikes, I just got chills. I not a poet but I know something beautiful when I see it. I loved it! It's just too bad they don't have a 'Love' ...

Hola, Whisper! Back for another chapter. This review is gonna be a short one so yeah... On we go! So...how lucky of you. I only have one real nitpick :) ...

Hey, Pink here! Alright, what to say? Your grammar, punctuation, descriptions and imagery were all great! There technically is...almost nothing to say. I can't rant on your character because she's ...

Thanks for the request, I'm working on it right now :) I'll update as I finish Luna Chapter 1.0:*Reviewed Chapter 2.1:*Reviewed Chapter 2.2:*Reviewed Chapter 3.1: *Reviewed Chapter 3.2: *Reviewed Chap

Banned for always having a Mcfly avatar!

Hey, Pink here! I slapped my sweaty palm onto my chest. I could feel my heart flitting around like an angry bee. “It was just a dream,” I mumbled, resting ...

Hey, Whisper! It is I, again. Here to review the next chapter. Okay, I'm sorry but I can't help myself. I must nit-pick! Don't worry, it's not much ;) You ...

Hello! Pink here, (hey, you're a Pink too! that's pretty awesome) Anyway, you asked for a review so here it is. Now I don't see much I need to nitpick ...

Hello Whisper, I am here, like I said I would be :) So I kinda just skipped the review for the first chapter because, well, everything had already been pointed ...

Chapter Three (Liliah) Look into my eyes and hear what I'm not saying, for my eyes speak louder than my voice ever will....~Unknown. ~~~ I silently watched as my math ...

Lol the exact same outfit the person in the avatar is wearing xD