Shearwater

Chapter Four (Lucas) There's always a period of curious fear between the first sweet-smelling breeze and the time when the rain comes cracking down. ~ Don Delillo ~~~ The lucid ...

Alright, back for more! “But that’s what we are made for. We’re different though. A new race, a better race. We are The Guardians,” he proclaimed with pride. His stony ...

Hey Danie, back for another review! The air around him seemed to be crackling I don't understand this one. How can the air be crackling? I burrowed into the familiar ...

Bondgirl-Done! Danie, I think I'll be done with all your chapters by tomorrow. I still have a lot of time to spare, so if anyone would like a review, please ...

Hi Bondgirl, thanks for the request! Shall we get started? I'm not going to nitpick really, since most of the things I wanted to point out have already been addressed.(Yay!) ...

Hey there! Okay I have to say I love the first keyboard picture. The monotone and all makes it a soft tender picture but I don't like how the arm ...

LOL I love your introduction. I'm Pink, and welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy your time here! Oh, how's the weather in Narina? xD What an odd character, you ...

8/10 reminds me of the crazy frog song :)

Hi there, it's Pink, dropping by for a short review. Alright, so here's the first thing I'd like to point out. Starting a story off with a quote isn't something ...

Hey Danie, it's me again. I couldn't help myself. I had to do another review :) Alright, so let's get started. Can’t I just forget it all? I asked myself. ...

Hey, Danie, Pink here. Alright, so I liked the description in this piece more than the other chapters. You flow was exceptional and I understood what points you were trying ...

Hey, back for another review! So basically I don't have much to say about this one. I mean, it's all pretty good and there was nothing to nitpick. I'm again ...

Hey, Mad it's me. You said you posted something so I was like, okay let me review it! So, here I am. Ready? I sit here, perfectly still, quietly sitting ...

Hey, Mad (You picked the one that stands out, huh?) I prefer to be called Pink, or Shear, whichever one. Oh you have? I'll definitely take the liberty to review ...

Welcome to YWS, Madwriter! We're all big on nicknames here so what would like to be called? Maddy? Writer? Mad? Lol :D Anyways, you've come to the right place! Wow, ...