Shearwater

Hi Anthony, welcome to YWS! Pink here, dropping by to review :) :arrow:Introduction needs some work. It's not the best idea to start a story with a description of how ...

Hi, there! Wow, I have to say, your title brought me in xD I love how simplistic and clean your drawing is, making it easy on the eyes. But there ...

Hi Lauryn, Pink here! >You really want to watch out for repetition. I noticed you repeated a few words quite a bit of times. Remember, the thesaurus is your friend! ...

Bingo! That's the one, yes. :) I plan to visit every country in the world! That's when I win the lottery... So, where do you want to visit the most?

Thank you, Shubs! I went and edited the things you mentioned, except that ozone part. I know what you mean and I'm going to check up on that later >.< ...

Total eww.

Hi there, Pink here. Dropping by for a review :D I tried to blink back the tears that were trying to push their way out of my eyes, and stop ...

Hi, Emmy! Pink here, dropping by for a short review :) I woke on my cot, freezing cold. I swung my legs over the side of my cot and felt ...

Hi, Kakagirl! :D Pink here, dropping by for a review! MMm.. I thought, as I sat down on the rusty,old bench licking furiously at my ice-cream. Loose the second capital ...

But they have that one new building there! I saw the opening of it on youtube, it was cool. But yeah, I just like traveling. :)

Pudin.junidf-Done!

Hey, Pudin! Here as requested :) Okay, so not much nitpicks. Yay! Description In the beginning, you did a wonderful job. I could see and picture everything brilliantly. I really ...

Ayummycandy :3

Hey, All mixed up, Pink here :) Would you look at that, you're luckily my two-hundredth review :D *throws confetti* Okay, no one cares. Back to the review. Alright, I ...

Hello! Pink here :) First I love it :) I mean, I like how the grass is dark and the sky is contrasted by being so light and all. I ...