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Re: My many Faces... of Doom!
Hiya! Pink here :) Okay, I love the picture. I like the distinct black and white tone and the 'noise'. But as Coral did mention, I do think it's over ...
Aug 26, 2010 -
Re: insert coin
You get a hobo's sock! *insert coin
Aug 26, 2010 -
Re: Taboo [5]
Whisperer, Shubhi, Tanya and Carlito, thanks a bunch for the reviews! I went back and edited the things you mentioned. By the way, Liliah was feeling guilty for having such ...
Aug 25, 2010 -
Re: The Perception Of Love
First of all, welcome to YWS, Aiden! I'm Pink and I'll be reviewing this piece for you today. So, without further due, shall we get started? To bad, you have ...
Aug 25, 2010 -
Re: Heal. (Chapter One)
Hello, Pink here :) A few nitpicks before we get started. I don’t always believe them, I can’t help but think that my real parents are out there somewhere, I'm ...
Aug 25, 2010 -
Re: Mama, wake up!
You wrote something else? Awesomeeee! Anyways, as your loyal sidekick (not exactly) I'm here as reviewer! So, shall we begin? Whoa, after I wrote that, I accidentally clicked something and ...
Aug 25, 2010 -
Re: Possessing Maya edited- OLD
Hey Tanya! Thanks for the Pm, I'll be happy to review for you! Okay, so I had a review going but then I accidentally deleted it and ugh, I'm so ...
Aug 25, 2010 -
Re: Bring it on! (Open)
Hey friend, It's me again :3 I posted the fifth chapter of Taboo, can you please review? I had a hard time with this one >.< Thanks, ~Pink
Aug 25, 2010 -
Re: Taboo [5]
Chapter Five (Liliah) Simply having children does not make mothers. ~John A. Shedd ~~~ I couldn’t help the tender smile that crept on the tip of my lips. The smudge ...
Aug 25, 2010 -
Re: Love Song (unfinished)
Hey, Scrowl (love the name) Pink here! First of all, welcome to YWS! I hope you have fun here :) Alright, on to the review. Nitpicks skin and like an ...
Aug 24, 2010 -
Re: Vanity
Hi there! Okay, I don't normally review poems, so I'm sorry if this review isn't helpful. >.< I have to say, I thought your poem was very deep and full ...
Aug 24, 2010 -
Re: Nettle's End
Hi Jojo, Pink here! :) Nitpicks All the misinterpretation s and bad memories swirled about their minds like a swarm of angry bees. but here they were again. Running. >I ...
Aug 24, 2010 -
Re: Rename The User Above You
RoboCandy :3
Aug 24, 2010 -
Re: Rename The User Above You
FannyBender XD
Aug 24, 2010 -
Re: Character Protects Life
Hi Shubs! I saw you posted something and I giggled and was like "must review" :) Okay, so anyways, here I go. Character is a diamond which scratches all other ...
Aug 24, 2010
