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  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Sally Crow and the Bullet-less Gun Prologue

    Hello MadHatter! Pink here, dropping by for a review. I do have a few nitpicks that I'd like to point out, so bare with me >,< The big clock tower ...

    Aug 31, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Excerpt. Reviews/crits would be nice XD

    Hi! Pink here, dropping by for a quick review. So I do have a few nitpicks that I'd like to point out. "…Pretend what?" I honestly don't see the point ...

    Aug 31, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Lemons,Adventurers and Girls one

    Hello CardDragon, Pink here. Dropping by for a short review. Okay, the first paragraph wasn't really getting much attention but when the girl screamed I was like, "Whoa, what's going ...

    Aug 31, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Big Brown Eyes

    Hi Bluejay, Pink here -dropping by for a short review- So, I really did like this poem and I liked the descriptions you used. The imagery was also nice :) ...

    Aug 31, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Heartstrings

    Hey Coral! It's me, Pink (no duh) But yes, I saw you posted another poem and I usually read all the ones you post but for some reason I really ...

    Aug 31, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Autumn Photography

    Hey Kamas! Pink here! Oh dear, they're all so beautiful! I kind of wish you made them a bit smaller though, so I take it all in easily but disregarding ...

    Aug 31, 2010
  • Questions and Answers Re: Can I delete a Page?

    Oh fiddlesticks... That's okay, It'll get lost sooner or later and never be found, except by me :)

    Aug 31, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Just a little something ...

    Hi BorntoShop! Pink here! :) So I love all these pictures. I mean, the they're so vivid and the colors just shine and dance in the picture that it's all ...

    Aug 31, 2010
  • Questions and Answers Re: Can I delete a Page?

    Haha, I know how to delete a post. I meant a 'page' Like these? I accidentally made two for my novel and I don't know if it's possible to delete ...

    Aug 31, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Fashion Designing by ME!

    Wow Shubs! I didn't know you did fashion designs, that's really neat! You're pretty good at drawing too, that's so awesome, haha :D So most people already got to this ...

    Aug 31, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: farewell

    Hi! Pink here :) So, I agree with what Retrodisco said about the whole stanza and thing. I felt like it kept going and there were no breaks, but even ...

    Aug 31, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Flowers I know you see them all the time

    Hi there! Pink here :) I love these shots, they're so clean and I like the after rain effect. 1. I like this but it seems like it's too close ...

    Aug 31, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Too Many Secrets Ch.1

    Hiya! Pink here, dropping by for a review ;) Nitpicks and with it all the freedom that I’d had. This kinda like a double, I had had. Get it? Haha, ...

    Aug 31, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: The Seven Dwarfes

    *squeal* Totally awesome! I like how they're all in different poses and you actually went to color them, instead of leaving it black and white like I do. >.< My ...

    Aug 31, 2010
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Change One Letter [2]

    stew

    Aug 31, 2010


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