Shearwater

Edward Cullen from the Twilight Movie. He didn't look like the Edward Cullen I pictured in my head while I was reading the books...No, not at all!!

Hi Victoria! Nice to have you here on YWS. I like the name Victoria, I know I once used it as my main character's name in a previous novel. So, ...

Drop I was just wondering, could you add one letter?

Hey Carlito! Pink here, as promised! :) So I'm not really going to nitpick on this because it seems you have a good understanding with most of your grammar and ...

The way you are-Bruno mars :D

Flow

Hi WritingWords, Pink here. First of all, I agree with half of what you're saying. There are people who get reviews but don't go back and edit their work. I ...

Flyergal

Hi! Pink here :) “I’m sorry too.” I said between gasps. Comma after too, not period. Remember if you use 'I said' you need a comma. They need to be ...

Heya Wolfgirl! I'm Shear or Pink, ah - whatever you decide to call me. We like nicknames :) First of all, welcome to YWS! Yes, we party here and we ...

Hi Tabi! Shear here :D 1. I like the pose and I really like the outfit, super cute. I like her hair and she had the whole 'imma model' thing ...

Hi :) I had the same question when I began my novel. I also usually write in female perspective, just because I think it's easier but I wrote in the ...

Hello Temp. I'm Shear, dropping by for a quick review. Alright so I didn't catch many grammatical errors or punctuation errors so that's a total plus. So my first reaction ...

Dreamcaster :3

Hi Retro Disco! Pink here! Just a few nitpicks... to see if their was anyone guarding the door. *there was . One guy, small and stout. Fragment. "There was one ...