Shearwater

Hi Alz! (I, for some reason, love that name) Welcome to YWS, again! And hopefully this time you can stick around longer, haha. I'll definitely be looking for some of ...

ZeroWings Love the avatar by the way ;)

Hiya Weaver, Pink here :) First of all, I have to say, I love your title for this. It's quite capturing and it got my attention :) Next, I love ...

Thanks for the critiques everyone! And, Livelaughlove, you sound super excited-which makes me super excited ;) Ugh, and again, Whisper catches all my mosquitoes. . . Thanks bud, don't know ...

Oh duckies, I've been down that path before and it isn't pretty. Usually, I find myself either 'daydreaming' or reenacting scenes in my head, almost like I'm the narrator and ...

Screeching Laughter by my mother ;) Haha, just kidding. I'm listening to Spin Cycle, Last.

Hey Shubs, I posted chapter seven of Taboo, if you wanna check it out :) Much love, ~Pink

Megsug-Done Blackbird-done Wow, I'm fast ;)

Hi there! Pink here, as requested ;) So I don't have many nitpicks, those have already been picked out so I don't really have much to address. Now, with that ...

8/10 It looks powerful.

Hi Meg, thanks for the request! :) So here's the review! "Did you hear?" "Six more." "Actually came into the light." I think you should put these in separate lines. ...

Hi guys! Thanks for the reviews! Ofir: Thanks for the comment and I totally get what you mean by Olivia, I remember I placed her in chapter three and in ...

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ExtravagantVelvet

Ink Haha, Not in a very creative mood today.