Shearwater

Banned for having more posts than me :(

Hi Isha, it's Pink! Here to review, hope you don't mind ;) So I'm going to nitpick first and then get on with my overall thoughts on the piece. Nitpicks ...

Hi Ren, Pink here as promised :3 So, I noticed quite a bit of typos and mistakes that I'd to point out so bare with me. Also, I haven't read ...

Hi Violet! Pink here, as requested ;) So, first of all, I'd like to say you did a fairly good job, considering what the crazy plot generator gave you. I ...

Hi Yuriiko! It's Pink :D If...you have some time to spare, mind reviewing this little piece for me? Don't worry, it's short, but It's a excerpt from a new novel ...

Banned for not having a location.

Hiya Georgie! Pink here, and welcome to YWS! *dances* So, I'm going to be reviewing this piece for you today and I'd like to start of with a bit of ...

Hi, Pink here :) So, I also agree with what SilentRain suggested, I mean it would have been easier to read if your stanzas were separate. I did think your ...

Hiya, Pink here :) So, I actually found what you meant by using the apple as her thought on skipping class, I find myself in the same situation sometimes. Like, ...

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Hi Mirror (I can call you that, right?) Pink here and...Welcome to YWS! *high five* Wow, no way? You're a writer too? So flipping awesome, so am I! So what ...

Thanks for the reviews :) Also, the "Glass Vase" would sound more intriguing if it had a more sinister name. "Glass Vase" seems very vague. Something like Demon's Chalice or ...

Hey Writerchick, Pink here! Nitpicks It was raining the day my mother disappeared and the same day I would Are you saying she's going to disappear on the same day ...

Hi Kylan, Pink here :) Red tangents of blood that glisten like an old radio song from better times. The blood is black, she is stirred Alright, so I'm a ...

8/10 It's Epic sounding :)