ShaydeDesiree

The story was told very well but they rhyming was off. I will not say it ruined the story but it did take away from it. There are some splling ...

This is a short but sweet poem. I think it was great. I dont know how this fits into dramatic poetry but I loved it! It made me laugh and ...

The blood stains my clothes and my face, As I hold your dying hand “God don’t take him away” I cry But I know its too late. I see it ...

In school on that fateful day Tears stained my teacher’s face The TV was on, Chills creeped up my arms People jumping from way up high “The sky is on ...

For me, it helps me get into character. But it all depends on you as a person. If you are more the introspective type (you like to look inside yourself ...

Maitre D- Opens the door for Britney and K-Fed. Britney Spears- “Golpea me bebe una vez más” (Maitre D shuts the door which hits Britney and knocks her over. K-Fed ...

I love the detail! if i could draw like that i would draw all the time. :)

This poem is very well written. But the ending was kind of blunt. I felt like i wanted more out of it before she fell. "And Jake is weeping into ...

This story seems like it could turn into something awesome. I cant wait to read the next part to it!

27 hours of no sleep, you think I would be tired. But I wasn’t. The night my dad died, I didn’t sleep at all. My body ached, but I wasn’t ...