Shauni

Hi Elly! Pleasure to have you on the YWS! :D Have you checked the Welcome Forum?!? If not, check it only on monday... Anyways...let's review this. Just a thing, I'm ...

AHAH! Let me tell you, i am a wilight fan but God... I loved this, it's so hilarius... Excellent job! Loved it! Keep going! Shauni

Hi there! I liked this, as you said it is not very special, but it's cool! “Listen here you bitch and listen carefully. The Ashleys have dibs on the Peytons, ...

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Your green eyes stared at me, piercing through my heart.

Thanks for all of yours reviews. I will try to follow them! Next time will be a lot better! ;D *Shauni*

Well, i've been reading some of your poems,and this is my favourite by far.I'm new in the YWS and all the others good writers have already corrected you, I have ...