Shaundeman

I liked it. Very well done. As it said in the title this was done for a contest, right? I think I get the gist of the contest, but I'm ...

So this story sounds interesting enough, however, it sounds an awful lot like X-Men. I'm not sure if that was your intention, but it is very similar. The school for ...

This will be brief. I just wanted to say that I liked it, but I didn't get the premiss. Did Belatrix (probably spelled wrong) have a daughter? A neice perhaps? ...

This wont be review length, but I just needed ot add my two bits. I wish to contend your point on Snape. I understand your point of view, but in ...

I liked that. I, personally, am not a poetry person by trade per say. I do novels more, but I saw your poem and thought I'd give critiquing it a ...

I assume these are zombies you are writing about. I'm not sure how they are considered oxygen suckers, but I like that you are trying to veer from cliche titles ...

I must say that upon reading this I was confused. I'm not sure what everything you said meant together, but each individual piece gave some really good imagery. I'm not ...

Personally I don't think that the tense of the story gets in the way of the presentation. I do, however, agree that it needs more tug to it. It's critical ...