ShaunaJAY

A question spun in her mind, The answers she could never find. “What does this future hold? Do I already know?” The road seems narrower now, and she remembers something ...

Hey thanks for all the views, if you wouldn't mind leaving a comment or review that would be great and I will return the favour :) if you want me ...

Beautiful poem :) Now I know nothing about writing or anything so don't take anything I say too critically or personal. I think maybe the addition of a few commas ...

Again, this is very good writing. Just a few mistakes to work on. “How are you? Dear one , Have you been alright?” Put a comma in here. Same in ...

Thank you Zly! Yeah I knew I had made a mistake on that part, I wasn't sure if the apostrophe should be 'til or til'. Thanks for clearing that up, ...

Hi there ;) would really appreciate if you could review this for me! I'm new here

Hi there :) Firstly, I just want to say that your poem is very good, perhaps in the weong category though, I would have put this in the descriptive category ...

This isn't bad, I like your style, reminds me of my own. One thing I will say I noticed and I think would make all the difference is if you ...

Hello TwistedMuffins.. love the name :) I would appreciate very much if you would review my poems. I am new here, I only have two pieces up so far. And ...

You haven't felt freedom 'til you've danced in the rain, suffered through pain and had it taken away. You haven't been taught 'til your bridges have burned, repeated mistakes that ...

I think this is a really good piece of work for a fourteen year old! Fair play. Gloomy feeling throughout reading, I get a sense of uncertainty.. but I enjoyed ...

Framed and faced, Blamed and braced, I allow them to call me a holy disgrace. I try and I fail, I fail and I cry, I sit in the shadows ...