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  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey there!

    haha i'd stand by Harry Potter..when I was younger I was like obsessed with the series. I analyzed every book and read them all over and over again lol I ...

    Apr 8, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: God's Grace

    I enjoyed this! I read it through about three times and it's a very smooth and easy read. The timing is good as is the rhythm. I t is your ...

    Apr 7, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: Just need a little help with a Simile...

    How about something like, "...gnawed at me like a parasite." Simple and clear!

    Apr 7, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello there!

    Hey Ariana! I'm a newbie like you...this is my second day, but I'm already liking this place more than any other writing site I've visited. Everyone seems really friendly and ...

    Apr 7, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: My Little girl.

    I really like this! But some things I am confused about: In the beginning of the song you used the words "her" and "she", and then all of a sudden ...

    Apr 7, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Stand by me

    Hey White! I liked the poem, it felt like a song and the rhythm was pretty good although it felt a little off in a few places. It feels like ...

    Apr 7, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey there!

    Thanks everyone for responding, you're making me feel very welcomed! :D What's your favorite genre to write? I love writing fiction short stories and novels. Romance and historical fictions are ...

    Apr 7, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey there!

    Hey everything, I just signed up to this site today. Usually I don't get into places like this, but YWS seems like a cool place. I love writing as well ...

    Apr 6, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Messenger

    I got the inspiration for this poem a few weeks ago and finally got to write it down. It turned out a bit different than I originated but I like ...

    Apr 5, 2009


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