ShannKenn

Hello Aeternum, and welcome from a fellow newbie :D You've done a fantastic job of this piece. It had me on the edge of my chair the whole way through. ...

Well, that's me hooked! As a kid I absolutely adored Cornelia Funke's "Dragon Rider", and reading this now rekindled that same sense of wonder. The sensation of flight through the ...

Hello Mellifera, here to drop off a wee review :D I'll admit that I haven't yet read the rest of your work, but this section has me greatly intrigued to ...

Aaah - another one I'll have to go back and read from the start! I love the vibe that Canary gives off here, it reminds me a little of Disney's ...

First of all, I love the colourful scenes that you have successfully painted. I can almost see those last rays of sunlight glancing off of the water as the night ...

An interesting start - I'm curious as to what comes next! I think that this piece would benefit from you separating the thoughts in the present tense from the actions ...

Most of the comments I would have given on this have already been mentioned in previous reviews. I agree with AlyTheBookworm on the eyes and brow facing more of a ...

I love the bittersweet premise behind this, and the piece itself being short and sweet. There are a few moments where you have switch abruptly between past and present tense ...

I hardly consider myself qualified to leave you a technical review, but I enjoyed this chapter so much that I would like to highlight some aspects of it. The rythm ...