Shakyll

OHMYWORD. I like it. :] My favorite part would be "The darkness has been burnt by light The beast will never win" But, maybe you could use a different word ...

Really, really interesting. The type of story that you read over and over again because there's so much depth and intricate wording. I like how we aren't told everything, but ...

Really good. Your descriptions and wording are excellent. I love your description of the guard, and of his nametag. And the description of her injury is really awesome. Basically, I ...

i like :] it's good...just one thing, you used the word "alfa" but I think you mean "alpha." Other than that...I really like it. The technical computer stuff in the ...

Pretty cool :) a few typos, though--first paragraph, *seams, instead of seems. *seen, instead of scene. *next hundreds of questions, instead of just next hundreds questions. *that's, instead of thats.

This was very dark, rather depressing, and epically brilliant. I LOVE IT. Your descriptions (for example, the first paragraph) are amazing. Just one thing--I think that in the last paragraph, ...

Pretty interesting :D I liked the part about "there weren't any big strong men at the elevators!?" Well done. I wonder if it was really a dream or...? Excellent.