Shakespeare

No it's fine. I don't think it was harsh, I like the criticism actually. I'm starting another short story and I'll have it posted soon. Thanks! ~Monkeyswagg

Oh, and for the bad one being Joe or Paul, that's supposed to be something for your own instinct to determine, to add a little mystery to the story. Thanks ...

Thank you very much. I did think of the character names on my own, actually I thought of the whole story in my bed a few nights ago and I ...