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Re: You and Your Eyes
hiya Carly, Thought the song was good, but my main criticism is that it does slip into cliche quite frequently. The repetition oy "you" i feel is quite unneccessary. However, ...
Jul 18, 2009 -
Re: My Only Way To Love You
Hiya. Oof i cant stand Taylor Swift haha!! I totally get what you are saying though. The thing is, i wrote this song AFTER id written a melody on the ...
Jul 18, 2009 -
Re: Luna 1
Very very very powerful. Description was brilliant. I cant really add any more to the review than what the others have written-so i wont!!!!! Keep it up!!
Jul 18, 2009 -
Re: The Fickle Finger of Fate
Very good. I liked the variation of sentence length-which gave the mildly disturbing tone more power.
Jul 18, 2009