Shailz

I'm liking the description! wow talk about a very violent relationship! I think the use of onomatopoeia was good as you can hear the sound of all the slap and ...

I like the use of imagery of the darkness the use of metaphors made the reader more interested as we can visualize the atmosphere! I think the first part of ...

I like the use of imagery of the darkness the use of metaphors made the reader more interested as we can visualize the atmosphere! I think the first part of ...

wow your an awesome drawer!

I like this poem. I think its good that you tried to using rhyming techniques the topic seems really good! I think overall the poems 4 stars!!

Im liking this poem! :P

You never succeeded and you never will You didn't even try You just keep stumbling over your own feet You can't even do one thing right What is wrong with ...