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Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 31
Thanks so much for the review and encouragement! You have definitely helped me a lot and pointed out so many important things I%u2019m going work on when I go through ...
Jun 14, 2019 - Re: The Hero's Brother (23.1) Jun 3, 2019
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Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 13 (LMS IV)
Thanks for the review! Hm, it looks like I have a lot of editing to do with this chapter xD Thanks for pointing out issues that are confusing so I ...
May 29, 2019 -
Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 12 (LMS IV)
Thanks for the review! This was actually a perfect place for you to pause lol. I had only had through this chapter edited based on the feedback I'd gotten -- ...
May 26, 2019 -
Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 7.5
Thanks so much for the review! I really appreciate all the encouragement and critiques you're giving -- your feedback is so helpful! So, heh, for the 7.5... this novel has ...
May 22, 2019 -
Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 1 (LMS IV)
Thanks so much for the review! You pointed out so many helpful things that I hadn't even thought about (like how she def should be showing her General side more ...
May 18, 2019 -
Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 7.5
Thanks for the review!
May 17, 2019 -
Re: The Secret of Tayburn Zoo: 15
I don't know honestly? I just felt like she was super nice in this chapter for no apparent reason lol. And nah I got you that it's not to human ...
May 13, 2019 -
Re: Soul Cutters Chapter 6
Oh I didn't mean change it in your story, I just meant title. Once you establish what a cutter is in your story that's fine -- I just feel like ...
Apr 5, 2019 -
Re: Soul Cutters Chapter 6
Hmm... a bit? But it still gives me self-harm vibes. Could you think of tying another theme into the title maybe? Like "Soul Cutters"? Or... I'm actually not super clear ...
Apr 4, 2019 -
Re: The Secret of Tayburn Zoo: 11.3
I mean it does make sense that she'd feel guilt if she was responsible... but she's claiming she wasn't? Like she's saying she has no idea how they found out... ...
Feb 20, 2019 -
Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 30
Ahh, true, on the skirmish thing. I was...?? idk?? I guess I was thinking of Elmirana as being one of the bigger little skirmishes and them wiping out that percentage ...
Feb 18, 2019 -
Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 29
Thanks so much for the review! That was lightning fast! :D I literally lol-ed at your Dads with Dragons comment, and thoroughly enjoyed reading all your reactions hehe. I will ...
Feb 16, 2019 -
Re: La pluie de l'aprés-midi (Miraculous Ladybug)
Ahh, I see. Yes, that does make more sense haha thanks :)
Feb 16, 2019 -
Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 28
Thanks so much for the review! ... that actually makes a lot of sense at the end. I guess I wanting to move into a sparring scene but that does ...
Feb 16, 2019