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Thanks for your review, Icy! The feedback is really valuable to me and I appreciate it! I do have a question. What did you mean by "Interesting jump, as I ...

Whoop whoop two reviews in one day it's a RevMo miracle ;) So I apparently need to make this clearer, but Kieran ran to get Derik when he saw Biryn ...

Thanks so much for the review! I was thinking they were on the ground and as he grabbed her throat they kind of flailed and her arm swiped across the ...

THANKS FOR THE REVIEW

Thanks so much for the review!

Thanks so much for the review, Icy! I appreciate it! Yeah, the bit with Valeren has been pointed out to me as being too anti-climatic so I'm definitely planning on ...

Thanks for the review! I meant the bit you quoted as her being really sarcastic, but just about every single other reviewer has also mentioned that, so I'm definitely planning ...

Thanks for the review!! I appreciate it! I'm also not offended at all if people only show up for Checklist xD That was literally the only reason I thought up ...

Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you liked it!

ahaha thanks for the review! I appreciate it! :D

Ahaha, I'm so glad you liked this story xD It was bourne out of intense frustration of not being able to find a mystery that wasn't in the middle of ...

Heya Vil! Thanks so much for the review, I appreciate it! Honestly, the scattered style was supposed to be part of the artistic choice to kinda drive home the chaos ...

You can be Miss Betsy if you want

Thanks so much for the review @SolarRuin, I'm honored to be your first review ;) To do a quote it is [quote]The bit you want to quote goes here. [/quote] ...

Thanks so much for the review @SolarRuin, I'm honored to be your first review ;) To do a quote it is [quote]The bit you want to quote goes here. [/quote] ...