Shady

haha tank u she b a stereotype of herself

So Jerica saved this girl, and the girl seems a bit scared of her. Jerica seems a bit miffed by it, which adds on to the idea that she has ...

(unless she only tried to and didn't actually punch through him) Aha yeahhh that was a bit of hyperbole, just to demonstrate her training to "follow through" with blows rather ...

yosh!

Hey, Shady! I feel lucky that I caught your story as you're starting anew again >:) Because now I can hop right in easy peasy. Aww COINCIDENCE bc *I* feel ...

hahah sure thing! I didn't make it in time with this one tho RIP xD oh well! it's a fun read! I suppose I can stop Schadenfreuding you now xD

xD oops lol oh well. I am getting adhd-y so dunno if I'll even make it through 11 before the end of Review Day xD certainly not 12. But that's ...

xD that's valid hahah happy to help!

You%u2019re the bestest

Totally meant to reply to these before and then forgot, oops. But thanks for the reviews!

I sometimes struggle with writing kinetic/combative scenes in my own stories so I think I will definitely read that over a few times more and take some notes! Aww, that's ...

You are correct when I first read that question my gut reaction was to not like it xD but the more I think about it, the more I agree with ...

but I honestly have not seen what Aerik describes. I think this is what you wish Jerica to be now but I think you wrote a fundamentally different Jerica in ...

I feel like Jerica is glossing over the idea of realms and her shock is over there being other realms, when I feel like she should just be struggling to ...