Shady

Thanks so much for the review! You raised a lot of good points and I'll definitely include them in the revisions. I appreciate! ^-^ And congrats on tortoise! HALF WAY ...

Fair points! I always intended for Aerik to be the mentorly Derik-esque character but I accidentally turned him into a dick early on when I was trying to make him ...

This is the most epic apple commercial I've ever seen in mah life hahahah how many times can you say the word apple in a single chapter... although he seems ...

So do letters naturally materialize structured like this in Jerica's world, or this just Y.W.S formatting? Oh, whoops, didn't even notice that. That is definitely YWS formatting being funky, it's ...

ahaha

Ok so I'm all for time jumps, but in this case I think you definitely need to soften the ending of the previous chapter because that plus skipping two weeks ...

Hahahahaha omg xD

no u

hahahaha it wat u get 4 tryna meme my meme xD

xD Dare you

I just-- *how* is this already in the spotlight?

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Mister dirtbag, I mean, Femola. I don't think assassin has that much punch, or at least as much punch as you want it to have. Like, surely Femola has his ...