Shadowwriter1

4. An Unforgivable Deed Ryuu ran, as fast as she can, newly fuelled by fresh fear. Night was falling, which made Ryuu all the more nervous, for the wolves came ...

I can't help but be slightly confused by this. It sounds like a prologue or a brief summary of a soon to be story except for the other random lines. ...

A Legends Path is interesiting and exciting. It immediately has something that draws the reader in. Your grammer can use some work but apart from that it is really good ...

Grammer! Grammer! Grammer! You need to work on your grammer. With stories, poems or even song lyrics you need to know the basics of grammer and how to use it. ...

Path of Destruction is a really nice dramatic poem abou someting destructive, as the title tells. It is well consructed and very miserable. I really like it but I think ...

I really like Light Turns To Dark. It is interesting and has a good plot, tough i have a couple of pointers. 1. Grammer! Work on you grammer for pete's ...

Hey, it is a really good story but you need to work on your grammer. I am slightly confused though, is the chraracter you are using the same one in ...

Prologue The wind howled and thunder cracked. Lightning lit up the sky in short flashes. The sky was blacker than a shadowy forest at midnight. A thunderous roar echoed across ...

The story is well written, interesting, has suspense and great characters. What more could a reader want. You are a clever writer and have a natural ability when it comes ...

3. An Arising Foe Ryuu was hunched over a tin of off-white paint. She was repainting the fence because it had been covered in blood after the nights beating. This ...

You are a natural. The story is interesting and well written. The discriptions are excellent, they give you a good idea of the setting and what is going on. The ...

2. The Impossible Creation Ryuu awoke at the base of the fence, her clothes damp with blood and dew. She lay still for a moment, trying to asses her injuries. ...

Defeat the darkness is a story that will have someone hooked from the first paragraph. It is interesting and draws the reader into the story, making them leave reality and ...

Midnight is interesting from the first couple of paragrphs. It captures the readers attention and makes them want to know more. There is a good amount of detail which creates ...

Bite is a really good story with an interesting mixture. Warewolves and forced marriage is something most people would not think about which tells a reader that you are creative ...