ShadowofTheDay

This won't be much of a critism, as you appear to be much more talented at writing than I, but I would like you to know I think this is ...

Okay, so this is, overall, quite good. You have the base but you need to work on sentence structure. When you describe her hair, you might want to use something ...

Okay, so this is just an idea on a story. please give some critique! I awoke to the sun coming in the small window of the hut. I rolled over ...

good story! I enjoyed the realism of the teen world.

Well, this was quite good, but I did notice that you made a slight mistake "I tried to through it off me, but my efforts were futile." Throw, not through, ...

Hey everyone... I thought I would just introduce myself. Of course, I won't give any personal info, but here are some basics. I have been writing for five years and ...