Shadowhunter14

awesome! I loved the imagery you created adn the description. SOme of my favourite lines were....actually, I can't name them all. :P Loved it! Keep it up :P

Hi! I quite liked this, but maybe you could make a few changes. Your writing style is pretty straightforward which is a good thing, but perhaps you could use more ...

I really liked the hunger games too! it had the right amount of romance and poltitcs, and I liked the world that Suzanne Collins created. She made it quite believeable. ...

Wow! I really enjoyed this! some of the lines didn't quite make sense and maybe it could've been structured a bit differently, but overall i liked the idea. The title ...

I like it! It was quite short but I thought it was clever, the way you depicted heartbreak. The only typo was "With a broken hear,", I think you meant ...

Nice! I love the Mortal Instruments myself and I think that you wrote your own plot and characters as well as Cassandra Clare! I also liked your dialogue and how ...

Hey, I agree with a few of the suggestions mentioned above but otherwise good job! I think the way that you wrote from Max's POV was good and reasonably faithful ...

Hey - I think that this could have been a really good poem had you continued it - it was REALLY short. But your description was really good in my ...

Nice! I liked the idea nd title of this poem. the only thing is "YOUR daring me to be the best" should be "YOU'RE daring me to be the best' ...

Hey, i quite liked this! The title interested me and i like how you structured the poem. My only advice is maybe not to use too much commas? there were ...

OMG i love the mortal instruments, they're one fo my favourite serieses at the moment! (you can probably tell that from my username lol :P) Cassandra Clare is quite a ...

I really like your writing. I also write dark stuff like this - maybe we have something in common! I liked how your writing flowed and was free of errors ...