Shadowdance

Loved the story, Carbon! First, I'll start off with saying: I liked that you described everything with minimal details. I love writers who do that, because it leaves so much ...

Overall, I liked the idea of it. The title certainly catches the eye (why would it be untitled?). I do hope, however, that there is another part coming to this. ...

It's a very good story. I really liked it, truly. It had a good title, one that hooked me almost immediately. It truly fit the "fantasy" genre you listed it ...

That was FUNNY! I really liked how you wrote him, so intent on helping a village, seemingly ignoring his dragon mistake, and totally conceited at the same time. He prances ...

Very good story. There were a few words missing here and there, but other than that, there wasn't a whole lot wrong with it. I liked that the MC was ...

Cool story! I really enjoyed it. A few things I noticed have already been brought up, like a few of the sentences being run-ons, and the missing details of how ...