Shadowdance

Loved the story, Carbon! First, I'll start off with saying: I liked that you described everything with minimal details. I love writers who do that, because it leaves so much ...

Overall, I liked the idea of it. The title certainly catches the eye (why would it be untitled?). I do hope, however, that there is another part coming to this. ...

It's a very good story. I really liked it, truly. It had a good title, one that hooked me almost immediately. It truly fit the "fantasy" genre you listed it ...

It was dark and rainy the morning that started my adventures. It was a Saturday morning, almost eleven o' clock, and I was still exhausted. I had been up until ...

It was dark and rainy the morning that started my adventures. It was a saturday morning, almost eleven o' clock, and I was still exhausted. I had been up until ...

That was FUNNY! I really liked how you wrote him, so intent on helping a village, seemingly ignoring his dragon mistake, and totally conceited at the same time. He prances ...

Very good story. There were a few words missing here and there, but other than that, there wasn't a whole lot wrong with it. I liked that the MC was ...

Cool story! I really enjoyed it. A few things I noticed have already been brought up, like a few of the sentences being run-ons, and the missing details of how ...