ShadowPrincess

I liked this one. The characters could have been a little more in depth, but other than that it was amazing. I could almost feel what your character was feeling ...

This was a really good idea. It was a good first chapter too. I definately liked your style. Not a lot if people think to write about Satan having a ...

I loved this poem, it was really good. I liked how you didn't have to repeat yourself to get your point across. This poem was amazing, and i think you ...

I liked this one. I mean it was a little confusing at first but I got into it anyways. I especially liked how you described what happened to the girls. ...

This was great. I could actually feel MC's (main character's) emotion as i was reading this. You've done an amazing job and i'm eager to read the secong chapter. I ...

this was good but it was a little to short. You could have elaborated on his looks, his voice, or something else. Also, I didnt really get any emotion from ...

I loved your story. I especially liked how Jules and Sam interact with each other. I alos liked how Sam isn't too pushy about being in lovw with her. I ...