ShadowLily

I wrote this song for a boy I know, long story, don't have time to tell it. I'm a good singer and I wrote music to go with this too, ...

A morbid scent that drifts through the air Like an ominous reprise The smell of burning skin, Spreading through the dark grey skies First line, love it. The word "morbid" ...

I think this is really good! It lurches, it churns In the fire of my heart it burns, The creature is alive And from within my thoughts it cries. First ...

I love this, it's so pretty. The poem/song/whatever is so . . . heartfelt. I can feel your pain, not only from the fact that I know how you feel, ...

This is amazing. It really pulls the reader in. I had to read more when I read "She tried hard to remember her real name, but she couldn’t. She had ...

I love this! The first stanza was great; very descriptive, loved your word choice. You second stanza was also awesome, I swear it sent chills down my back. I just ...

Welcome! You'll love this site, the works on here are amazing and people give such good reviews :smt001 !

OMK Sorry! My friend posted some of it and I thought he wrote it . . . deleting . . . .

Thanks Morningmist! And I might do that, not sure what I would replace it with, though. That part is repeating the chorus twice though, so it's good when it's the ...

This is like SO amazing. I love the way the words just flow together so naturally, I've never been able to do that well. Can you put a track with ...

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That's really good. I write songs too, and I love the terms and such that you use in the song, if that makes any sense.